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LOST Season FOUR Fanfic I wrote - Info inside (U)

Postby Fivebretz on Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:07 am

Here are two "episodes" I wrote for Season Four last summer. I haven't looked at these in a LOOOOOOONG time, I had to google myself to find them :) At the time I had (what I thought were) some really cool ideas for story arcs. I wrote them both in one night. I hate putting down a book eg, if it isn't the end of a chapter, and similarly I wrote both of these from start to finish in one sitting i.e. Night One = Episode 1, A week or so later - Episode 2 in one night. What with school and all, this soon became too taxing to keep up with, and I "discontinued" them as it were.
As it is, I'm quite proud of them. I'm posting them here because I'd like you to crit my writing style - I'm currently studying English at A level, and I hope to be a Script Writer in future. I feel I captured the "tone" of each character quite well. Soooo, what do you think?

http://www.darkufo.co.uk/inforapenny.pdf - Ep 1 - "In For A Penny" - Des centric

http://www.darkufo.co.uk/trickortreat.pdf - Ep 2 - "Trick or Treat" - Ben centric
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Re: Season FOUR Fanfic I wrote - Info inside

Postby Gus TT Showbiz on Sun Jun 01, 2008 4:14 am

You hit the Sayid dialogue right on, exactly how he sounds on the show. :D Good writing mate
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Re: Season FOUR Fanfic I wrote - Info inside

Postby Bella on Sun Jun 01, 2008 6:31 am

Can you do me a favor and edit your subject line to include the rating (G, PG, PG-13, etc.)? I haven't had a chance to read them yet, otherwise I'd do it myself.

Thaaaaaaaaank ya. :D
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Re: Season FOUR Fanfic I wrote - Info inside (U)

Postby Fivebretz on Sun Jun 01, 2008 10:46 pm

U for Universal. From memory, only instance of vulgarity is the classic Sawyerism "Son of a b****", so watch out for that if you find that offensive :)
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