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Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction - 402 - Mechanical posted

Postby DesmondDavidHume on Sun May 09, 2010 6:13 pm

I have begun work on a new FanFiction series - Torchwood series 4. I have set out the overall storyline and I have no written episode 1. Some people said that they would like to read it, which I am really glad about because I would love some feedback as I want to be a scriptwriter when I am older. So, yeah, enjoy. (:
All I ask is can you please rate the script (you do this in the information box below the file after following the link) and please leave me feedback - either on here or in the comment box below the script. Thanks (:

I will add to the blog as I finish new episodes (:

> 401 - Torchwood 5 - http://www.scribd.com/doc/31110289/401-Torchwood-5
> 402 - Mechanical - http://www.scribd.com/doc/32128475/402-Mechanical
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby Sandiwich11 on Sun May 09, 2010 9:26 pm

Cool, I really enjoyed it and hope to see more :thumbsup:

I would love Russell Tovey to be in the next season, but if it stays in the hands of an American production company I don't think he will be :( Great to see Lois in your script too, you managed to put together my dream TW team :w00t:
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby DesmondDavidHume on Mon May 10, 2010 5:13 pm

Glad you enjoyed it :D
the next episode wont be finished for a small while as I have exams soon so I need to revise for them :mad:

i love this torchwood team too xD
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby Iceman on Mon May 10, 2010 5:28 pm

Oh! Nice! I'll give it a read later - but I noticed Freema and Noel arent on the cast list, no Martha and Mickey? :(

Can't wait to read it though!
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby theotherslover on Mon May 10, 2010 7:22 pm

Looking forward to the next one
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby DesmondDavidHume on Tue May 11, 2010 6:25 pm

Iceman815 wrote:Oh! Nice! I'll give it a read later - but I noticed Freema and Noel arent on the cast list, no Martha and Mickey? :(

Can't wait to read it though!


yeah, martha and mickey arent credited. i have no plans for them to appear either. maybe next series if i write another one?
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby Iceman on Tue May 11, 2010 6:59 pm

I think they would be great on the Torchwood team, or at least one of them...

But thats just me, I'm sure you have your own plans :D :thumbup:
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby leggyorlyb on Wed May 12, 2010 10:52 pm

really enjoyed reading this and would love to see more! :thumbup: awesome TW team you have!
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby DesmondDavidHume on Tue May 18, 2010 3:43 pm

hi guys :)
i am really busy this week and next with exams, but episode 2 should be finished and posted at the end of next week (:
its not going to be as good as episode 1, but it will get a lot better throughout the rest of the series, just cos im a little rushed with episode 2, sorry!
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby Sandiwich11 on Tue May 18, 2010 4:10 pm

Don't worry, exams are nearly as important as TW after all :lol:
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby Bella on Sun May 23, 2010 5:31 pm

sandi wrote:Cool, I really enjoyed it and hope to see more :thumbsup:

I would love Russell Tovey to be in the next season, but if it stays in the hands of an American production company I don't think he will be :( Great to see Lois in your script too, you managed to put together my dream TW team :w00t:


And Russell is too busy being human... har har har. :PP
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby leggyorlyb on Sun May 23, 2010 5:53 pm

Bella wrote:
sandi wrote:Cool, I really enjoyed it and hope to see more :thumbsup:

I would love Russell Tovey to be in the next season, but if it stays in the hands of an American production company I don't think he will be :( Great to see Lois in your script too, you managed to put together my dream TW team :w00t:


And Russell is too busy being human... har har har. :PP

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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby DesmondDavidHume on Fri May 28, 2010 1:46 pm

episode 2 shall be posted later tonight when i am on my home computer (:
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction Scripts - Torchwood 5 post

Postby Sandiwich11 on Fri May 28, 2010 2:54 pm

Nice one, I will look for it when I get home from work :thumbsup:
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Re: Torchwood Series 4 FanFiction - 402 - Mechanical posted

Postby DesmondDavidHume on Fri May 28, 2010 7:24 pm

http://www.scribd.com/doc/32128475/402-Mechanical

Here's episode 2 of the series - Mechanical.

"Robots attack the newly formed Torchwood team."

Sorry that it isn't as good as the previous episode, but I've been revising a lot for exams.
Enjoy, and tell me what you think please (:
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