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Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby Gus TT Showbiz on Sun Jun 01, 2008 1:50 am

I would like to see how everybody think season 5 of Lost should start. Just post the coolest opening scene you would like.



SCENE 1 - An Apartment
Camera close up on an eye. Stays there for 5 seconds until the eye opens. Zooms out to show Locke laying on a bed.
He looks at the clock. The time is 4:22am. He lays there breathing heavily. The alarm goes off with the clock now reading 4:23am. The alarm is the song "Hit the road Jack" by Ray Charles He gets up struggingly. He turns off the alarm clock. He finally manages to get into the wheelchair on the side of his bed. He wheels off into the kitchen. He opens the refrigerator door and gets out a gallon of milk. He pours a glass. While drinking it he hears somebody speak

In a very low voice, like a growl
UNKNOWN John

Camera stays on Locke. His eyes get wide and he stops drinking his milk. It looks like he has heard a ghost.
He wheels around and asks in an astonished way

LOCKE Mr. Eko?

The camera now turns to reveal that this mysterious person is EKO.

EKO Why did you do it John?

LOCKE I don't know what you're talking about.

EKO You aren't going to be forgiven for your actions.

LOCKE Eko, you don't know what you're talking about.

UNKNOWN Yes he does John

Camera turns to reveal Claire

LOCKE Claire?

This time John is EXTREMELY surprised

LOCKE But how.. how did you... get off..?

He is cut off by

CLAIRE Why did you do it?

LOCKE Do What?

Eko and Claire simultaneously say

CLAIRE They suffered.
EKO They suffered.

Sounding a little irritated
LOCKE Who suffered?

CLAIRE He'll find you John

Locke closes his eyes and shakes his head

LOCKE I Don't know what you're talking about!

When he looks up, nobody is there.

You now hear a gun cock. You see a barrel of pistol get put against the back of Lockes Head. Another unknown person speaks.

UNKNOWN I'm not going back to the island John.

The person walks in front of Locke so he could see who it is. It is Sayid. Sayid aims the gun at Lockes heart. Fade to black and then you hear the gunshot.

cue the LOST INTRO

I know it is not very good :( , but lets see what some of you think should happen.
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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby radioinmyhead on Sun Jun 01, 2008 2:13 am

A woman is giving birth. There have been some complications with the pregnancy but it looks like everything will be ok. One of the doctors says "Push, push!". The father is right next to her holding her hand. We notice that the shirt he's wearing has the Looking Glass symbol on it. We then notice that all the doctors and nurses have the Staff symbol on their outfits. The baby is born and then we hear the Whispers. Everyone panics for a second, one of the doctors reaches for his gun and you hear people saying "The Hostiles!". Then everything becomes quiet again but something is wrong with the mother. The nurses take the baby away and they ask the father to leave. He protests (he has a british accent), but he obeys. One of the nurses gives him the baby and says "Congratulations Mr. Lewis, your daughter is so special, every child born on this Island is special." Lewis is happy but can't help but worry about his wife. She points at her and asks "Will she be ok?"
The nurse says "We're trying to figure that out sir".
His answer will be : "We're going to name her Charlotte. She wanted to name her Charlotte".

LOST
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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby Ricardus Alpert on Thu Jun 05, 2008 9:10 am

Sayid didn't kill Locke...
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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby crikey on Thu Jun 05, 2008 10:26 am

Open on an eye, a brown eye. Camera pulls back, it's Vincent! He's sat at a desk smoking a cigar in a poorly lit office.

Sun enters the room... "I've made contact with Widmore..."

Vincent: "BARK BARK"

Sun: "No, you don't understand, he's the only way we can get ba..."

Vincent (irritated): "BARK BARK"

Sun: "Ok, Ok, I'll do it... I'll kill him"

Vincent: "BARK"

Sun: "Yes, yes, I'll ask Kate to pick up some Bonio's on her way back"

Cut to black... LOST.
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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby Joshjb on Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:33 pm

TheLegendLives wrote:Sayid didn't kill Locke...


He could have!

Great descriptions, btw! They're all very intriguing! :)
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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby Iceman on Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:43 am

crikey wrote:Open on an eye, a brown eye. Camera pulls back, it's Vincent! He's sat at a desk smoking a cigar in a poorly lit office.

Sun enters the room... "I've made contact with Widmore..."

Vincent: "BARK BARK"

Sun: "No, you don't understand, he's the only way we can get ba..."

Vincent (irritated): "BARK BARK"

Sun: "Ok, Ok, I'll do it... I'll kill him"

Vincent: "BARK"

Sun: "Yes, yes, I'll ask Kate to pick up some Bonio's on her way back"

Cut to black... LOST.

Best Opening Ever!

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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby Gus TT Showbiz on Fri Jun 06, 2008 1:47 am

Iceman815 wrote:
crikey wrote:Open on an eye, a brown eye. Camera pulls back, it's Vincent! He's sat at a desk smoking a cigar in a poorly lit office.

Sun enters the room... "I've made contact with Widmore..."

Vincent: "BARK BARK"

Sun: "No, you don't understand, he's the only way we can get ba..."

Vincent (irritated): "BARK BARK"

Sun: "Ok, Ok, I'll do it... I'll kill him"

Vincent: "BARK"

Sun: "Yes, yes, I'll ask Kate to pick up some Bonio's on her way back"

Cut to black... LOST.

Best Opening Ever!

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Agreed, Pure Awesomeness :lol:
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Re: Post your own LOST opening scene season 5

Postby lost-day-out on Fri Jun 06, 2008 2:52 pm

crikey wrote:Open on an eye, a brown eye. Camera pulls back, it's Vincent! He's sat at a desk smoking a cigar in a poorly lit office.

Sun enters the room... "I've made contact with Widmore..."

Vincent: "BARK BARK"

Sun: "No, you don't understand, he's the only way we can get ba..."

Vincent (irritated): "BARK BARK"

Sun: "Ok, Ok, I'll do it... I'll kill him"

Vincent: "BARK"

Sun: "Yes, yes, I'll ask Kate to pick up some Bonio's on her way back"

Cut to black... LOST.




funniest one ive heard
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